Thanks to RonovanWrites for providing the prompt/challenge!
Shine by K.S. Fause
Rise and shine, my love,
he said; as if he had an
ounce of potential.
photo credit: fusion-of-horizons via cc
Thanks to RonovanWrites for providing the prompt/challenge!
Rise and shine, my love,
he said; as if he had an
ounce of potential.
photo credit: fusion-of-horizons via cc
K.S. Fause 
Hahahahaaha Oh this is awesome! I at least I hope I am supposed to laugh. Now I am worried that I am not supposed to. What if he is some insane person and is alone with a soccer ball?
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Hahaha! A soccer ball??
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What was that Tom Hanks movie where he was trapped on the island?
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Ohhhhh right! Yes, yes, I know that movie. But was he insane?
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He talked to the ball. He might have made out like he was just doing it to stay sane, but to come up with the idea to do it in the first place one might question his sanity.
Or it might be mine that is in question.
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No, no, you’re right. It’s insane to talk to a soccer ball.
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Rise and shine! 🙂 The emotions in me after reading this are like um fun… (hope you understand that comment) but i like the Haiku… 🙂
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The “shine” depend only on us, people can say it, but it needs to come from the our insides. The photo is nice,
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To me, this is like the moon saying this to the sun. The sun rises everyday, whereas the moon has to have some potential to rise as some nights it’s not there :), well that’s my crazy story behind this haiku 🙂
I hope you don’t mind?
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Not only do not I mind in the least, but from now on, that’s how this haiku should be interpreted!
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Wow, thanks very much 🙂 My mind can sometimes really wonder off 🙂
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I like it :-).
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Thank you!
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Love your poem & the interpretation is very sweet!
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Thanks so much!!
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Succinct. Really like this haiku.
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Really like this haiku. ❤
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Thank you so much Carolyn!
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